Thursday 4 June 2015

    Paragraph Writing goal

This term in writing I have improved on paragraphing my story's.

I have improved on it by going though my story's and making a line in between the two paragraph's.

You put a line in between the paragraph's when the next paragraph is about something else but still on that same topic.

This is an example of paragraph's.

Victor gulped, he was scared. The robot had elongated green slimy and wavy arm’s, he had lots of cupboards, drawers and doors on him. But suddenly, the robot waved at him. Victor waved back with relief. The robot said in a shaky voice “follow me” Victor followed the robot with wonder. 

The robot led Victor into the INVENTOR'S LABORATORY; Victor was excited. The robot grabbed Victors ticket, opened up one of his doors and shoved the tickets in! Victor and the robot continued on walking, Next minute Victor  and the robot were in a massive room with lot’s of  Inventor’s stuff.

There is a gap in the middle because it is the next paragraph.

By Ella

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous12 October 2015 at 15:06

    Wow Ella you have really done well on your hard goal.
    I remember having that goal I found it very hard to accomplish Paragraphing as my goal.
    I really Enjoyed reading your paragraphs they are full of Wow words and I want to read more!
    Are you enjoying writing paragraphs?

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  2. Anonymous12 October 2015 at 15:06

    Wow Ella you have really done well on your hard goal.
    I remember having that goal I found it very hard to accomplish Paragraphing as my goal.
    I really Enjoyed reading your paragraphs they are full of Wow words and I want to read more!
    Are you enjoying writing paragraphs?

    ReplyDelete

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